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Writing Question!!! Thank You !

I am Writing a Narrative Paragraph thats uses Dialogue What Can I add to it from What I already Have ?( Crime Scene)

The rainy march afternoon made the sidewalk look like a river of ink that poured out along the inner city blocks. The yellow tape was already wrapped around a perimeter of a chalk outline, and several note cards scattered on the ground.

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jdrew39 		You could continue by having each of the cards shout out what it identifies. For example you could say,
The first note card shouted out, "A POOL of BLOOD!." The pool of blood was easy to see. However, the next card quietly stated in a soft hush, "An indescript footprint, not easily identifiable because of the wash from the rain."
You can continue in this same pattern until you have noted what each card says and how it is said as in the shouting of the first card and the soft whisper of the second card.

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